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Comment 12169 New (Unresolved)	DRAFT_GEC_ESG Criteria Document_1Dec2023_Redline Changes for Public Comment_v2.pdf (Revision 1)

Comment 12169

New (Unresolved)

DRAFT_GEC_ESG Criteria Document_1Dec2023_Redline Changes for Public Comment_v2.pdf (Revision 1)

Comment Submitted by Kazuhito Oosumi 2024-01-14 23:03:50	The following name is not correct: Incorrect: “VAP: validated audit process” Correct: “VAP: validated assessment program”

Comment Submitted by
Kazuhito Oosumi
2024-01-14 23:03:50

The following name is not correct:

Incorrect: “VAP: validated audit process”

Correct: “VAP: validated assessment program”

Submitter Proposed Solution	The error should be corrected as follows: VAP: validated [DELETE: ~~audit process~~] [ADD: assessment program]

Submitter Proposed Solution

The error should be corrected as follows:

VAP: validated [DELETE: ~~audit process~~] [ADD: assessment program]

File Name	DRAFT_GEC_ESG Criteria Document_1Dec2023_Redline Changes for Public Comment_v2.pdf	State	Draft
Date Added	2023-11-29 5:53 pm Eastern Standard Time	Revision Number	1
Submitter Name	Cassandra Leone	Size	776K

Summary	Normative References	State (Disposition)	New (Unresolved)
Date Added	2024-01-14 23:03:50	Last Updated	2024-01-14 23:03:54
Submitter Name	Kazuhito Oosumi	Assigned To	Unassigned
Company Name	Japan Business Machine and Information System Industries Assoc.	Response	None
Interest Category		Category	Editorial
Origin	Public Review	Section, Page, Line	Section 2.0, Page 9, Line 26
Item	Paragraph	Item Description

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