If the revisions are meant to ensure that the inoculum density in the machine is what was verified on the bench, then I support the intent and change my vote from negative to affirmative, but I would recommend revisions.
- Dispense from instead of dispense through. "Dispense through" is less clear if the intent is to collect samples.
- Add "all" to the 2nd sentence and delete "ensure the entire food contact flow path is exposed to sufficient challenge" from the 3rd sentence. The act of dispensing samples does not ensure that all food contact surfaces were exposed to the inoculum.
- Add a sentence at the end to compare Ni to the intended challenge density.
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